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Gwrthwynebu
Publication Draft
ID sylw: 3686
Derbyniwyd: 23/09/2009
Ymatebydd: Mr Richard Brookes
Crynodeb o'r Gynrychiolaeth:
Re-drafting of the "Key Issues" has diminished their clarity and impact. The Strategic Objectives have lost sight of the Key Issues - Key Issue B10 (Air quality) has disappeared completely. The Strategic Objectives are now bland, generic and linguistically-contorted and could as easily refer to Milton Keynes or Preston as here. Please re-instate the Key Issues (or show the relationship to the new Objectives).